I almost died
The day that you ignored me
Feeling numb inside
Your lack of attention
Just floored me
Now how can I
Get past this
Continue and survive
The loss of you
Continues to make it
So hard to get through
The day
The day feels like
Feels like nothing personified
When I asked
If you loved me
Why did you lie
Trying to climb out
Of the hole
That I now find myself in
Watching the sunrise
As another lonely journey begins
blackswanpoetry 
★★★★★
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thanks so much for the inclusion.
So sad when love dies or when you realize you were never loved at all! Very nice poem! Happy Rally!
Thanks for taking the time April. I really appreciate it. Please stop back. have a good one 🙂
You are very welcome! I will be checking out more of your work. You have a great one too 🙂
Being able to express so well such feelings is already a good sign. Well done!
Thank you. Please read more if you get the chance or Subscribe. thanks again for the compliment.
ahhh heartbreak is the worst..
i felt this…
nicely written…
Thank you Vanessa. Thanks for taking the the time to read and comment.Please stop back or subscribe. Have a good one!
Glad to see you shine in the rally.
🙂
Thank you so much. I actually posted this one for the rally.
But I am getting good response off this one too because of your blog. Everything is much appreciated. Thanks again 🙂
I love your site and as I browsed your blog I want to award you the Creative Blog Award.
Go to http://astorybookworld.blogspot.com/p/awards.html and pick up your award.
~Deirdra
PS. Great poetry! I love the design of your site, and the music.
Thank you Deirdra. That is very nice of you.
Loneliness either gives out the best in you or worst..and you portray the best in here..
Every time you wish you should know that,may be this wish doesn’t come true but something more beautiful must be waiting for you in the future.
And it was my pleasure reading your work so please don’t thank me for that and as stated earlier glad to be here 🙂
And thanks for the appreciation out there and i suppose we would connect well on the grounds of sadness 🙂 ..
Alcina
P.S.-I really am not familiar with wordpress much so would like to know how to be updated about your new poems.
on the home page there is Email Subscription
just hit sign me up and then add your email.
then each new post will be sent to you. hope you enjoy 🙂
wow thank you so much for what you said about my poem.
if you liked that one, you might like this one. it’s part of my life story but i need to tell you it’s rough reading, or should I say it was tough writing.
But I think you will like it.
I subscribed to your site. your poetry touchs me too.
Hugs,
Luna
thats awesome thank you. When I get a min I will check this out!
Wow! This is good Swan!
Thanks Elena for stopping by and the comment.
So sad when love dies and you think its all a lie. Wonderful hertfelt poem.
I can empathise this … Thank you for sharing!
By the way: Your background image is amazing. It looks like the tree is holding the sky : )
Martin
♥BEAUTIFUL ♥
thank you 🙂
ps. Is your name also Iron Horse, Author of The Voyage of Kings ? If so contact me. I’m an old friend of yours & have bought your book. DT
actually no sorry. Why does my stuff remind you of that person?
Because they posted black swan poetry on their site & blog
do you have a blog? I would check it out if you do.
two: Words unto the universe & Always423
Oh maybe they put up something of mine on their site. Some blogs have done that a few times.