I walk by you
You don’t understand
What you see
Trying to label
To imprison me
These chains I shake off
With ease
The limits of you
Have no effect
Your eyes remain fixed
Your mind perplexed
My identity is secure
My strength is flexed
Your perceived limits
Are wrong
I stand correct
Pushing those limits
In every aspect
The bars that
Hold you
I bend and brake
Never to be trapped
For societies sake
You live your life
Sub servant to
Everything that
Fits the norm
You’re a witness
To my spirit and
Strong Will
Combining together
For a perfect storm
To the restraints
And will of others
I will never conform
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Awesome! Love it! I feel the same way. Your expression is right on. I really like the wording.
beautiful.
A++
apt word flow.
Love this! I know the feeling all too well 🙂
Yes!!! Great words !
excellent write up..so less words…such deep thoughts
These words bring to mind someone I know very, very well.
Strong sentiments. Nice work.
Love you style of writing, raw yet pure in form! Going to have to add you to my blogroll!
Yes this is a good one, really appreciate the sentiment. Well done!
Brava ! fricken perfect! strong!
Thanks guys. I really appreciate all the comments. And Miki thanks for adding me to your blogroll! That’s awesome.Being pretty new on here I haven’t figured that out for my site yet. lol
this is a strong, powerful piece. wonderful
Very nice. I like the flow. (:
awesome! your words are strong and flexed as well!
enjoyed this piece!
thank you for your visit and comment
take care!
p.s. i love your blog design!
Very beautiful words.
Love your blog, too. : )
thanks guys. Glad you like it 🙂
you’ve perplexed my mind, also,,
🙂
lol
Powerful, strong, well put together. Nice entry.
(Thanks for stopping by my blog. Always nice to welcome a new face)
Great imagery too.
thank you
And I feel in the mood for this one :)Especially ‘And will of others
I will never conform’. Powerful and succinct. Thanks for sharing.
Btw., adore your blog’s style.
thank so much. That is really nice of you to say.
Loved the write and the message. There is far too much emphasis by those who think they know what’s best for all to be just plastic replicas. Individuality is important, and even more the so to revel in your own uniqueness than try to hide it away….
Excellent, very well done!
The you are so brave. I can read the strenght in your words & that inspires me.
Thank you Lu ann. I am really glad.
A very powerful piece… lending to the powers within each of us to go beyond the limiting influence of others and society. Very well shared!
exactly 🙂 thank you
cool, I like it. The site looks very nice too.
thanks
Yes, and keep on walking by those people too! :))
Well expressed. Flows beautifully too.
“i will never conform”
that’s the way one should live his life. what a powerful message!
thanks for dropping by at my site. 😉
I felt an empowerment much like my poem about walking away. Bravo! I love this–thanks for sharing your link with me, SwanRose.
thanks guys for the comments have a great one!
Interesting title!
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You write so effortlessly. Glad you stopped by my blog. Sizzling talent.
wow thank you! I really appreciate it.
The flow is cool, I liked it a lot, the rhymes, within, really inspiring 🙂 Thanks for the visit 🙂
You write a convincing ode to independence.
i am inspired. thanks!
Very nice! Love it!