It doesn’t hurt me
No hint of a sting
Nothing catches
The mud that you sling
Your absence thrown at me
Like a cold gust of wind
Feels good as if it comes
During a hot summer day
As I walk in the sun
Your clouds have gone away
All the pain you mean to cause
Hovers over you
As you live in your thoughts of me
And how I must feel
You would never allow yourself
To believe the truth
Surely my unbridled happiness
Can’t be real
Weights having been lifted
I am fleet of foot
With each step after your departure
I became more upright
Full of energy
And feeling light
As if paper carried by the breeze
How could this be
That I have let you go
With such ease
And more than that
I am better now
Than before
I feel enriched
Versus when we were together
And our lives
Were always in the shade
Of your choosing
So very poor
(Thanks for reading)
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What a marvellous piece!
Thank you Marinela 🙂 you are the first to comment!
Great write…Very powerful words. You are a fine writer, I greatly appreciate your poetry more and more each time I read. Thank you for sharing and know that I find your writing most sincere.
Thank you Randy I really appreciate that. It is very nice to hear. I am glad you have enjoyed what you have read 🙂
Fantastic. I am into poetry too and rap. This is just awesome! 😀
thank you and Thank you so much for your subscription. I will try to keep you entertained with poetry. Pease feel free to browse the post that are up as there almost 40. I am putting up a new one every thursday right now. Enjoy and thanks again.
Yes! Some people are better out of our lives. I feel the
passion and strength/
Thank you Cynthia. They really are for a lot of people. Thanks for reading
It was soul stirring and lovely. we need to search our lives and weed them out who bring us sorrow on a frequent basis when we can find peace without them
Thank you and well said
It makes a change to see a seperation treated optimistically, that you move on feeling better. Nice write.
Thank you Jamie
fun rhyming, love it.
thanks
Not all relationships are meant to last, or are healthy. I like this heads-up sort of approach to a split-up, and these lines especially grabbed me:
Nothing catches
The mud that you sling
Great attitude.
Thank you Ruth
A nice reflective angle of letting go and breathing after a relationship. Lovely share.
and Thank you for your kind words in my blog.
Thank you Heaven and your welcome
I like the comparisons here–the cold wind of absence feeling good, as you walk in the sun the pain and trouble hovering over the one who conceives it–enjoyed it much.
Thank you
Can be some joy to letting go, a strong emotional ride, well done!
Yes there can
nice the comparisons you draw and sometimes we have to make the hard choice to remove those that dont add to but take away from our lives…
and sometimes it is not that hard
I can relate to this.Reminded me of my own feelings back then.But all things become a memory.and then one just move on.
Powerful write.
Thank you June
As if paper carried by the breeze _ love that line. this was an awesome write.
I am glad you do
This is a great piece!
thank you ayala
This really flows; you use line breaks very effectively.
Thanks Manic
Take that, suckah! Love it! Vindication in a few short lines!
lol great comment
I like the way you handled the transition, well done. Hope after brokenness.
Thank you Apryl
I can hear the protagonist’s strength growing… nice.
🙂
So sad the end but you can see that this relationship was not for you and how you feel when it has ended and how you picked your way well done
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/10/the-bird-of-love/
not all break ups are sad
It’s never easy to let go, but if it’s for the better, then it must be done. Good luck!
Thank you Ahhhpoetry
“Were always in the shade
Of your choosing
So very poor”
fantastic closing series, feels of a position of making the pain worth something greater. ~ Rose
Thanks Rose that is nice of you to say
move on, you deserve better chances in life.
a lovely piece to chew on.
Thank you I glad you liked it
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