How could I be so dumb
Never listened to anyone
Not a drop of knowledge
From my rag was wrung
One mistake becomes two
My screen being fuzzy
Set my path askew
I couldn’t see
That I was surrounded
By so many clues
Forever bouncing
From wall to wall
Spectators stand and clap
Watching me as I fall
A hand reaches out
I try to grasp
But it pulls back
Withdrawing into the darkness
Much too fast
Oh God where is my
In case of emergency
Break this glass
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Very creative.
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I enjoyed the rhyme very much and the concept. Very nice!
sweet thanks
Amazing how you created the feeling of life being out of control with a controlled use of rhyme. You have a beautiful site.
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I enjoyed this poem very well done and I love your site…especially the trees. 🙂
thank you so much.
welcome, you rock.
fantastic word painting…
A++
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Thank you Jingle. Much appreciated…
Really love this! Very nice flow!
It’s never there when we need it… Well done!
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Like the rhythm of you words…nicely done.
Very cleverly done! I especially like the ending on this one.
This made me giggle…how often when I sit to write I had a “in case of emergency…” LOL!!
Thanks Krisse. Peggy I did when I wrote the last line 🙂
thanks dasuntoucha
Nice words flow.
thank you Meiro
A masterful poem -you are so in control. The lines run so smoothly and I just love the theme /concept and the end is super.
Thank you. That is very nice of you to say. I appreciate it.
You do pathos very well. At times all of us have asked this question. Nice flow and rhythm.
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wonderful poem. fav line. love all the imagery.
Thank you Isabel 🙂
Beautiful, I know what that feels like. , But you did it better than I have so far. Please friend me on facebook, I find it easier to post there, as I don’t have the net at home right now. It will be under lynda cress. please. Rest Gently Please.
That was Interesting. yes, something that could be useful.
( snaps ) Nice
I love the emotional intensity of this.
Thank you so much Angela